I was advised that the stark white of the paper I chose to write the notes on was detracting and thus detracted from the overall piece. To remedy this it was suggested that use news print and a translucent paper overtop it where I could write the love letters. The use of found objects which I chose seemed to be well accepted, as was the variety in depth. The use of the frame seemed to be generally liked while it was suggested that it might work better if it were a bit wider and more square (I’m still not the best with hand tools and wood).
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